Excessive Zeal

by Kari - Not entered

I know a zealous woman
Who devoured an Oreo
Double-stuffed
By biting half into it
Letting the lugubrious lard
Slide down
Teasing her tastebuds
And then like a barber
Slicing his victims 
She took each side
Dark and crumbling
And ground the one against the other
Twisting the milky insides
Until they, suctioned by an 
Unseen force
Divorced.

As she did this
An incredible shimmering of 
Impermanent brilliance
Dazzled her eye
She took this one look at
The engagement ring,
So meticulously placed in the 
Middle of her 
Cream - y
Delight
Tilted her head sideways, 
As if listening for the barber's
Instructions,
And like that 
Still frog with
His fly -
Stuck out her tongue and 
Gobbled it up.

Reason for writing:

    It's kind of a long history, but in brief:  A woman fell in love with this man she met in Thailand (he was traveling as was she).  It's one of those true-love-becomes-a-novel stories.  ANyway, they have huge religious differences that shouldn't matter, but it's at the point where those differences are keeping them from spending the rest of their life together, ie. "marriage".  ANd I'm wondering in this poem, whether sex or passion, or love is the binding force. I always take my emotions, expand them to some other realm, and then write.  So the poem isn't exactly about me, but kind of the universal confusion that happens in some relationships. Everything in it that you think might refer to sex, does.    

Birth sign: Not entered
Date created: 1995-12-04 20:30:40
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:38:42
Poem ID: 44613

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