TURNING POINT Why did you turn back, At the edge of the ridge? You could have jumped you had the chance, Why did you walk away? At the edge of the bridge? People are jumping all the time. You told me that today was the day, And yet you walk away, You were ready to call it quits, Why did you decided to stay? Why did you turn back? When the guns up to your head? You could have shot you had the chance, Why did you turn back? When the knifes in your hand, I've heard that suicide is planned. You told me that today was the day, And yet you walk away, You were ready to call it quits, Why did you decide to stay? Why did you turn back? with the phone cord round your neck? You could have died you had the chance, Why did you walk away, when the guns in you're hand? I heard that suicide is grand.
Reason for writing:
I wrote this poem a while back after someone I know commit suicide
I was just curious about what she was thinking and such
So I would like anyone's comments please. Feel free to email me
if you have comments or would like to hear other of my poems.
NOTE: I'm not suicidal as the poem may make one think (nor am
I psycho like many people on the web)
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