but nothing

by falcon - Not entered

I have a place to live, but it is not my home.
I have clothes to wear, but they are not my style.
I have people who care, but they only hurt.
I have friends, but they do not understand me.
I have a telephone, but there is no one to call.
I have an education, but no dreams in which to use it.
I have everything, but nothing that I want.
                   but I want nothing.

Reason for writing:

    It just came to me.  but i need advice, which of the last two lines sounds better.  please help.    

Birth sign: Not entered
Date created: 1997-05-29 18:33:01
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:39:30
Poem ID: 47283

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