Mollusks underneath, blistered feet kicking and splashing the foaming, raging Aquatic wonder, I follow the fiddler's music and journey north, guided by the single, pointing limb of the starfish, toward the glowing Reef where bathing bands of sunlight bleach the pebbled terrace. On my knees, I frantically dig through hundreds of rocks, inspecting, discarding, searching for my name. ('Tis a promise from the Island Keeper that he would write my name upon a white stone.) Victoriously rising to my feet, I tightly clench the engraved stone inside my fist, and as the ebbing tide bids me farewell, I weep. My rehabilitated soul shall never forget this replenishing, refreshing, renewing Nautical Expedition.
Reason for writing:
The poem was primarily an assingment given to me in a Creative Writing class. Beginning with the Acrostic, MARINE, I began each line of poetry with each letter of the word, "marine." After much criticism and many suggestions from the professor and students, this is what I came up with. The Island Keeper is a reference to God---in scripture, He speaks of writing names of his children upon a white stone.Birth sign: Not entered
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