Someone is hurt Something is wrong Someone is where they don't belong Hurt and abused Rotten and ashamed For something they should not be blamed Feel no love Only desire Wishing your body wasn't on fire From the bruises of falling Straight to the ground Out of you comes no sound A bird starts to scream A dog will attack The thing that killed you With just one wack
Reason for writing:
Didn't know when I was writing it what it ment. Figured out a month later that it was about a spirit full of hope and love being crushed by someone's harsh words. I found this web page while looking up some poetry and thought it would be cool to submit my works. I have always loved writing poetry and would like to know what people think of my writing. There are prob. many mistakes because I wrote it from memory and I don't have it right in front of me.
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