Thoughts

by Jada Andrews - Capricorn

Whisper as you always have
of spring
Letting nothing take time away
Here will I cry
and ask can he see me from there
A red rose falls like rain
Like the tears falling from
my deep, sad eyes
As my soul is crushed
and my heart is ripped in two
Alone, here in the deep comfort 
of my lonliness
As you lie free in the loving
Rays of the gleaming sun
A tear hits the ground
and turns the rose to dust
To be blown away in the
Mercilous arms of the wind

Life is a lie.

Reason for writing:

    I wrote half of this poem through magnetic poetry, and I
use it as an example of what you can come up with if you 
just sit and let ideas come to you.  As with my others, I 
would appreciate any comments you would give me on my poem.    

Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 1997-08-24 20:37:57
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:39:42
Poem ID: 47848

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