I felt some pain, and didn't know why. I went to the doctor, he said, You're gonna die! I looked at the doctor and said, What's the matter? He said, Well son, you have an infected bladder. Walking back, I didn't go far. A drunken man was stumbling out of a bar. It started lightning, to thunder and rain. None of that mattered, I was in too much pain Looking across the street at the bright, red ranch. Thinking of nothing, I didn't see the branch. Lying on the ground, blood flowing out of my head. Next thing I knew, I woke up in my bed. I went to the kitchen to get me a coke. I started to drink, when I began to choke. Out came my coke and my lunch too. I looked in the mirror and said, What can I do? I went outside to get some fresh air. I looked up and saw a big, brown, grizzly bear. The bear swung once, two times, three. I was so scared, I began to pee. I looked at my outfit, it were though as red paint. I began to breath harder, harder and then faint. When I woke up, I was on the floor. The doctor walked in and shut the door. He said, Nothing's wrong, it's just gas. I said, Se ya, I'm late for class.
Reason for writing:
This is about a person who fears that the doctor will say his pain is extremely serious. When this person is waiting on the doctor to check him up, he passes out. Then the poem starts.
I really like this poem because it is funny and yet has some kind of plot to it. This is the best poem I have ever written.
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