The Day It Happened

by Tianna:) - Not entered

*the day that it happened
the sky was the color of buttermilk
and the sun frowned upon the earth,
the flowers you gave me wilted
and i cut myself with a kitchen knife.

*the blood dripped crimson ribbons
into a stainless steel sea
as i cried for the unfortunate..
or just for the food i burnt

*i heard the door open and slam.
i closed my eyes in desperation,
and i turned and leaned on the counter,
to open my eyes to your face.

*the facts said you died last year
yet i could see your face
and feel your breath on my neck.
but as i reach out a wondering hand

you disappear

*the day it happened
the tears flowed forever
and i couldn't sleep that night
the day it happened
i knew that i wouldn't be alright.

Reason for writing:

    I am not completely happy with this poem but i have been 
assured it is good and still think it is worthy of some
kind of recognition. I submit this to all the people who have
lost a loved one or, as i have found, lost a boyfriend who
they thought felt true love for them, and not only feel he has
left but is truly dead.    

Birth sign: Not entered
Date created: 1998-04-15 15:06:03
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:40:09
Poem ID: 49325

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