Breaking Up

by Annebelle, I'm a Cancer - Not entered

I don't know how to tell you this, 
but I think our days are through. 
I'm really sorry but I guess I just
fell out of love with you. 
Please don't be mad at me, 
but there's nothing left anymore. 
The feeling that we used to have
just went out the door. 
I'm so sorry for doing this, 
I wish I could change how I feel, 
I thought we'd last forever, 
I thouhgt our love was real. 
Please try to understand, 
I never meant to hurt you, 
I still want to be your friend. 
I wish there were something for you 
that I could do or say. 
But really, you'd be happier without me, 
It's just better this way.

Reason for writing:

    </i><font color=violet>Well, duh, it's a breakup poem. I was inspired by the guy I REALLY loved, take a look at what he wrote: <BR>
I would've done so much for you, <BR>
but you didn't care. <BR>
You meant the world to me, <BR>
but was never there. <BR>
I gave so much to make it work, <BR>
but you didn't even try. <BR>
Now my world is falling apart<BR>
since you've said good-bye. <BR>
Now you have your eye on someone new, <BR>
to him you're very good. <BR>
I can't help but wonder why <BR>
you didn't treat me like you should. <BR>
Now I have a broken heart, <BR>
maybe time will heal. <BR>
I wish I had another chance<BR>
to tell you how I feel. <BR>
Now I sit here hurting, <BR>
with no one else to love, <BR>
Not just anyone will do<BR>
because it's you I'm thinking of. <BR>

Sweet, huh? For anyone who is interested, we did get back together. :)<P>
<font color=cornflowerblue><B>Um, excuse me, I think I posted this like, yesterday, well, we broke up again, I'm sorry, he just...has a drinking problem or something and I can't let my life slip away on HIM! (I'm 15, he's 16, we're in the 10th grade,) and whoever said it was too long, I'd love to critique your poetry some day, and oh yeah, PLEASE don't be mad or whatever we broke up, and I have gotten a lot of mail about him, but just drop him, and sorry to bore you with my life. </b><P></font></font>
Miles of Smiles and lOts Of lOve    

Birth sign: Not entered
Date created: 1998-05-01 22:24:37
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:40:12
Poem ID: 49466

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