Standing at the gate waiting to be let in, now she realizes she has led a life of sin. She did not make a move when she heard his ask her why? She just hung her head down,and began to cry. He showed her all the chances, she had closed her heart to him. Now it is time for her eternity to begen. She sobbed, God forgive me, please come into my heart. He replied, I'm sorry my child for it is time for... us to part.
Reason for writing:
I am a person who believes that to get into heaven you have
ask Jesus to forgive you of your sins and come into your
heart... I feel that you are responsible for your own fate.
I also am a realistic person and know we are not flawless..
God Bless...
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