Tin Soldiers

by dean - Not entered


                    Tin Soldiers

    Six tin soldiers
   
    melting in the heat, 

    staring at the enemy

    lying at their feet.

            

            Six tin soldiers          
          
            rotting in the rain,

            faces taut with anger

          and finger-painted pain.

                         

                            Six tin soldiers
                            
                            staggering thru the mud, 
                                                                                        minds numbed by horror

                            hands stained by blood.




  Six tin soldiers,
  
  Six hearts of stone

  Standing on a hilltop
     
        --all alone


                    dean

Reason for writing:

    
This poem was written at the close of the Cold War and just as we were getting into the War in the Gulf.   I wrote it as a written witness concerning the futility of war.  I submitted as a poem here because it was my first attempt at a serious antiwar poem.    

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Date created: 1999-04-18 08:11:17
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:02
Poem ID: 52258

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