I can see into your mind When you’re not looking The pain in your eyes is kinda hard to hide My self centered universe has been knocked out of orbit You smile that slightly evil smile Trying to be mysterious I see right through Do I seem that stupid to you? You’re half the man you think you are And cruelty won’t get you far You try and try to make me snap Thinking I can only take so much of your crap Why can’t I just leave, just turn away I think I might, I think I may Give me a sign, something to grasp Or is all that's outside just a hideous mask? *Feedback very much enjoyed!
Reason for writing:
This is my first poem, oh, I'm just so proud, right.... I want to know if I'm doing ok, how I could improve etc; Love feedback!
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