Darkness comes and takes away The final light and brings the gray Consumed in darkness we are now Light will shine someday, somehow And when this first day will break A drop of kindness will become a lake Hatred sickens this once great earth A world full of kindness will soon give birth Guns and convicts will be no more From every heart care will pour We must be patient for this day Because this world lies far away.
Reason for writing:
I am a 15 year old poet and need some advice on my poetry so please E-mail me with your good and bad criticism PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! Thank You!!!!!
Birth sign: Scorpio
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