Untitled (mountain)

by Aeryn - Aries

Sometimes moon shines
Off a sand dune, at night
Don't be afraid fall off
Mountain's too tall, kiss the clouds
The light is brighter
At the height, in the sky
We will soar the sky blue clouds
We will roar back at the wind

Reason for writing:

    I really enjoy playing around with words.  The basis of this poem is:  Creating and image using an abstract rhyming scheme.  For this one, i started off by writing down: moon, dune, fall, tall, light, height, soar, and roar.  then I just added words around it too create an image.  It's a lot of fun to do, I recommend it to anyone stuck for an idea.  let me know what you think    

Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 1999-10-04 21:45:24
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:24
Poem ID: 53435

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