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by FEEDBACK - Capricorn

Take my sky
Which longing eyes follow
The magnet as it simplifies
To ash below grass 
And the singing swallow.

Maria, as I kiss you
And blush
Loves rush
Across the daily fold confused and blue.

Oh the terror!
As you turn to go
Maria, Do I dare
My eyes are scared 
The skies snow!

Take this sky
Which longing eyes follow 
Maria, thy face! 
Will never as mine simplify
To ash below grass
And the singing swallow. 
Oh everlasting grace, Maria!
Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 1999-12-16 23:03:18
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:36
Poem ID: 54065

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