State of Rhyme (for erica michelle and desiree)

by J James - Pisces

yall are bugging with 
this overrreacting
with these comments
that are lacking
substance subtracting
from the wholesome 
state of this forum
which thrives 
on its decorum
for yall to instigate
and bring hate
to a place
I hold so dear
I fear this 
has gone too far
not as far as
to shed a tear
but to lend an ear
to those who speak 
with heart in mind
and not to make time
for those who judge
your state of rhyme...

Reason for writing:

    this came totally out of the blue and finished within two min cuz im just a lil sick and tired of yall saying this sucks and i hate her baby daddy n shit man.  get off it! we're here to enjoy each other's #@#$^% poetry and give good feedback not be lame ass chickens and diss each other cmon gimme a break.----J James    

Birth sign: Pisces
Date created: 2000-02-29 02:56:06
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:50
Poem ID: 54866

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