My Love Creed-COMMENTS?

by Teresa - Taurus

Here are my list of demands
I suggest you read it and obey my commands
Violation of any will cause you serious reprimand
First off- I'M THE BOSS!
If ya think different-prepare for more than just love loss
Cuz I'll crush your spirits and stomp out your heart, if it's ME that you cross!
Forget all that macho action
Cuz that's not what gives ME satisfaction!
Treat me like I'm your QUEEN
And I'll do more than just heighten your self esteem
Love me more than tender
And I'll forever make sure that to you, ANY service is rendered!
NEVER attempt to hit me cuz your privates I'll DISMEMBER!
Show me the respect that I deserve
And I'll show you the pleasure that my love will serve!
These are my conditions if you choose to be with me-follow them and I PROMISE my love will
nurture you till eternity!

Reason for writing:

    I know that this may sound harsh at first, but what I'm tryin to say here is that every woman needs respect to love a man the way he wants her to! Not every man knows this even though it's actually quite simple!    

Birth sign: Taurus
Date created: 2000-03-21 18:29:00
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:57
Poem ID: 55194

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