Others who've stood before

by A.J. - Capricorn

Not much else to do
on a random windy day,
but jump from my spot on the bridge.
I stand next to the others who've stood before,
their sunken eyes beckon me,
submit to the release.
Desire.
Anything but the pain they know I feel.
Their cold fingers will cradle my fall,they'll kiss me all over.
Anoint my wounds.
I lure myself, inch by inch.
They're close enough to claw at my clothes.
Tearing it from me,
what else do I have but to follow?
Grey souls with grey hair and grey hearts.
All of seventeen, all have stood before.
And flown after.
Their calling my name,
I can't disapoint....

Reason for writing:

    I was recently told by my english teacher to stop writing like this because it doesn't get published. Is she right???
Sorry about any spelling errors!    

Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 2000-03-22 01:12:15
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:41:57
Poem ID: 55199

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