Untitled (I'll title it later, just wrote it...title ideas welcome though)
You,
give me the strength I've never known
lead me down the path that takes me home
and when the dark is near, you come
and show me to the light.
You,
take all the pain away from me
Make sure that smiles are all you see
and keep me safe and warm so I'll be
sheltered from the lonely night
I,
will always be here by your side
will through your journeys be your guide
and show you that you needn't hide
from me, I won"t hurt you.
I,
won't be like all the others are
will be so careful with your heart
and I won't let it break apart
if you guard my heart too.
We
can overcome the past known pain
can learn to trust someone again
and if the tears fall down like rain,
they're tears of joy I cry, for
You
gave back my heart and soul, and
I
have lost all my control, and
We
feel everything is whole,
We'll never say good-bye.
~Jada Marie Andrews
6-21-00
For: Patrick
Reason for writing:
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend for our anneversary
coming up, and I'd really like to know beforehand if anyone
thinks it's good, and if they think he'll like it. Usually
I don't judge poetry as "good" or not, but this is really
important to me, so I'd love feedback if I could get it.
Birth sign: Capricorn
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