i came back

by antwan fields - Aries

three days in the valley 
time in the sun 
you make me feel like a 
metric ton

for you i sing a
pathetic song
i seem to think you
can do no wrong

im sad
im goofy
im sick 
im doofy
hanging upside down from
my toes on the rack
but it was for you that 
i came back

i don't like to be thrown 
hard or fast
and on my father's boat
there is a mast 

don't wake me 
im dreaming
nothing is as
its seeming

maybe for you 
i avoided the pack
but maybe it wasn't for you that
i came back

you make me angry
feel poor and homely
and you make me feel 
sad and lonely

i'm triumphant 
but i don't feel it
the pain in my feet
only seals it

oh, can't you see 
what you do to us
there are no smiles
like seeing pus
you disappoint me
and me you scorn 
like eating crow 
leaving me torn

cause i love you
but there it is,the spurn
and we're LONG PAST 
the point of no return

avoiding all the hype about the
quarterback sack
so i ask myself
why am i two games back

so i caught you
on attack
you looked at me and said sadly
YOU CAME BACK


Reason for writing:

    because of living conditions(moving away) i lost my first girl friend to someone else
and was thinking how it went    

Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2000-06-27 20:43:51
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:42:26
Poem ID: 56693

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