i concede(please read carefully)

by antwan fields - Aries

i can see nightfall
something that comes hard and slow
something that has a 
heavy flow
the tide comes in
slowly like a centipede
to nature i say
i concede
Darwin was a goof
freud was a genius, he said
norma jean was a loser
marilyn was in my bed
i have the cards
you wish you had some
but you only have 
the cuervo rum
stay away from that house on long and jackson
everyone says we're a 
gang faction
ignore the crap 
the chicken feed 
to you, girl
i concede
i don't understand 
just where i went 
but im sleeping outside in a tent
why do i exist
who did i piss off
to come here and not meet
phillip roth
portnoy's complaint was a book
that was written
and with this book 
i am smitten
i read salinger's 
catcher in the rye
and heard kelly's 
believe i can fly
i have no worth
my girlfriend was a boozer
my boyfriend was a picker
my brother a chooser 
im virginal 
in a white dress
and a bouquet of roses
and a finger pointed west 
and a ring on my finger
and a problem with weed
to Brian, my friend 
i concede
i like the nightlife 
that resounds from the north side
the play designed
was for kevin lyde
oh fuck you, shelly 
this isn't my meal
so why should i put down 
my approval seal
your life is crashing down
around us now
i'm laughing 
and i will not bow
im going to come 
and spill my seed 
to you, lover
i concede
this doesnt exactly 
make me happy
cause right now 
my life is crappy
i can hardly believe 
on christmas eve 
that youre still wearing 
your heart on your sleeve
you cant think 
or even grieve 
to you, dwayne
i concede
i traced your picture
with a fingertip
yes, you can have
just a small sip
im looking at mark
he's all in black
black cap, black shirt
and jeans that show his crack
and they point and laugh
there's a problem with chris
cause his attitude is
as poor as piss
i stare at e 
lick my lips
won't look around 
at all the dips
at e like he 
invented the clock
and me and danny 
wanna suck his cock
you call me a shyster
an honest man im trying to be 
so when he breaks up with you
don't come crying to me
this is absurd
this makes no sense
it leaves me afraid
fearful, tense
that you'll come back 
there is no doubt 
your pluses 
i tout
i have no remorse 
and no morals
i can see all the
rings of corals
i'm waving in the picture
and youre sick
the guy in the picture
why, that's dick !!
these guys blow
like neil reed
to mancow muller 
i concede
i love you guys
with all my heart
well, maybe not yet
but its a start
no one listens to you
any more
our next president
is al gore
i love you
but i feel greed
for all of you who've understood this
i concede  
Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2000-07-12 20:34:03
Last updated: 2021-04-14 17:18:11
Poem ID: 56867

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