Nightingale Freed

by E. L. Wright - Capricorn

Yes, I whisper,
I am half in love with easeful Death.
Stretching far out into the abyss
I feel no fear.

He hears my call.
The scars on my arms are a beacon
To show my willing obedience - 
I am his own.

The cut is deep,
The razor was sharper than before.
Wrists form a canvas for Deaths art,
I become still.

Consciousness ebbs,
The tide carries me out, torture fades.
I am half in love with easeful Death,
And he with me.

Reason for writing:

    Depression etc., I needed to get some feelings out. I was inspired by Keats's 'Ode to a Nightingale' (a favourite poem of mine) - hence the title. 'Easeful death' seemed to fit the mood I was in so I used his idea. I wanted to convey the impression of a soul finally free from the constraints of life. I would love feedback, as I have only been writing a short time. Constructive criticism is VERY welcome!    

Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 2000-08-05 07:17:09
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:42:34
Poem ID: 57172

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