Belief System

by E. L. Wright - Capricorn

Praying seems hypocritical
When one only believes in ones self,
Or perhaps not even that.
An insult to the power of belief so potent
That men would die for an entity
Unknown, yet so familiar to them.
An absolute conviction that someone
Heeds your own trivial existence
Is relieving
Comforting
Yet all the same dismays.

“Lord, hear my prayer.”

Our children gaze with an adoration,
Compelled to worship by the wise,
Those who know all and can explain
All the horror away
As an act of the divine.
Wide eyed wonder is their response
To a doctrine they cannot recall
Let alone comprehend.
Accepting
Innocent
Fervently they show their faith.

“Lord, hear my prayer.”

Heaven is an expanse of nothing,
Stars flaming torches
Hovering so precariously
Yet ineffective in lighting life’s passage.
Looking to the sky I am left blind
And cannot see beyond this dark void.
Are we but marionettes for the gods?
Our world a theatre of the obscure,
An amusement
A game –
Our strings pulled once too often.

“Lord, hear my prayer.”

Hear 
Me.

Reason for writing:

    All my life I was subjected to a religion against my will - I went to a C of E High School and then a Catholic college. I wasn't comfortable adopting other peoples beliefs. This poem was written as a reaction against religion, yet also a desperation to find something to hang on to, a reason why things happen etc. Comments and constructive criticism very welcome!    

Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 2000-08-14 21:12:59
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:42:36
Poem ID: 57265

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