Coma

by Sweetp - Sagittarius

I'm losing touch with reality.
I'm losing my idenity.

Was it really me?
That question is one that has to be.

I'm searching to find the answers too.
But where do I find them at.
Are they with you?
The answer to that.

I'm lost and confused, with no one to help me.
I'm suffering here, can't you see?

I can't tell you, no words do I speak.
For your understand, I do seek.

My mind is still active in parts.
I still feel things in my heart.

I can see what you do.
I just can't speak to you.

I open my mouth but the words won't come.
I have lost them, and don't know where to retrieve them from.

I try to move my body.
But nothing will follow me.

I'm uncomfortable like this.
and all feelings I miss.

My love ones come to see me.
I yell I want to be free.

Nothing comes out of my mouth and still
I have no release.
But I wish still.
For someone to help me please.

To at least take the time to say hi.
I can still hear you.
I just can't speak back.
and I don't know what to do.

Please don't ignore me.
Like I'm not the room, like I'm away.
I know you think your not hurting me.
But I know and can hear what you say.

I know you think I'm not
with you all the way.
but please think and stop.
Before letting out them hurtful words you say.

You say I can't hear you.
But if you look close you can see.
That I blink my eyes like you tell me too.
This is really killing me.

I see you standing there.
Your looking straight through me.
As if I'm not really there.
Your face I can see.

The pain in my heart gets heavier each day.
As the visits start to slow.
And you no longer want to stay.
You're forgeting me I know.

Taking up where life is supposed to go.
Do you ever think of me?
If so then let it show.
Please I just want to read.

It is the simpliest things I miss the most.
But I hope you know.
The love of my friends and family 
helps me to go

I'm fighting from darkness.
Hoping to find light.
I finally find the words.
and say them but everyone is out of sight.

I say I love you mom and dad.
I'm sorry I've made you so sad.

I want to come back to you.
and I'm trying hard too.

But not a loving face do I see.
For everyone has left me.

Reason for writing:

    I wrote this for a person in a hospital that was in a coma, this is how i think she felt.    

Birth sign: Sagittarius
Date created: 2000-12-26 05:53:59
Last updated: 2021-04-14 17:18:12
Poem ID: 59187

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