What Would You Do?(please comment)

by Kyle West-Powder - Gemini

As the rain finally stops,
and the sun comes out,
I see an angel standing
and she’s to precious to doubt

I walk over to her
and wonder her name, 
but I don’t dare to ask, 
because she just stopped the rain

And now the sun shines, 
on me as I walk, 
there’s a burning in my heart, 
and I cant make it stop

It burns deeper and thicker, 
it becomes hard for me to speak, 
My body becomes weightless, 
and my heart starts to sink.

My feet become clumsy, 
and my head spin’s faster, 
its too difficult to relate,
because no human can surpass her

I cant think of what to say, 
my mind is in a tangle, 
I mean what would you do, 
if you fell in love with an angel?

Kyle West-Powder

Reason for writing:

    The insporation for this peice of work is my girlfriend and just rembering the first time we met.
Ya'll tell me what ya think.
-PoWdEr-    

Birth sign: Gemini
Date created: 2001-01-21 14:10:23
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:24
Poem ID: 59726

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