DISAPPOINTMENT

by Alexia Caulfield - Libra

When you failed,
And called me from those crowded streets,
Crying.
I cradled the phone sympathetically,
A tear forming in the corner of my eye.
One for every twenty you dropped onto the
Cold concrete.
Oxford Street was a bustling mass of
Business men and tourists.
And I pictured you - akward - static,
Too long and thin not to stand out.
Heavy make-up 
Blurring the edges of your eyes,
Two smudgy dents in dampened cheeks.
Through my encouraging words
And reliable advice,
A half-hearted sense of disappointment.

Reason for writing:

    That person again, the inspiration for most of my poems. There was an audition, she didn't get it. She wasn't actually upset, I just exaggerated it for the poem. Any comments very welcome.    

Birth sign: Libra
Date created: 2001-01-22 15:22:06
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:25
Poem ID: 59751

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