One Lonely Night

by blah blah - Aries

The drip of the water
onto my cool, moist face
Lightning strikes from all around
Each illumination is my own mace

The downpour keeps hurting
but the rain has stopped
Thunderous booms surround my ears
God's will for me is Opt

A Cross abears far away
but the ground and my feet still stay
My soul fearful of Death
as my lungs drew their last breath

My knees crash weak and fall
Down to the Earth and ground
The bright lights mock their own success
to my last stand: The Grave I am confound

Reason for writing:

    There are times in my life that i am just compelled to write.  I wrote this poem when i was in that mood.  I would really appriciat any comments that you have.  my friends say that i have the gift of the pen.  Please tell me what you think    

Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2001-01-27 12:17:34
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:26
Poem ID: 59848

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