Torture

by Michele - Pisces

Those  who don't  know  what  hate  feels  like  have  
   never  experienced  real  love.
   For  no  hate  would  be  evil  and  cause  many  to  
   go  wild,  and  these  walls  are  too  pure.
   Then  red,  the  color  of  passion  fills  the  room,
   and  for  a  mere  glimpse  it  looks  like  a 
   medieval  torture  chamber.
   Then  I  will  go  delirious  to  see  it  much  longer.
   The  overall  putrid  look  drives  many  foolish, but
   tis  true  that  I'm  dreadfully  nervous --  none  to  
   argue  with.
   The  majority  over  rules  the  feeling  and  sends  me
   into  a   pit.
   A  profound  strenuous  abyss.

Reason for writing:

    The  reason i  wrote  this  peom -  free  verse  that  is,  is  because  i  was  just so  melancholy.  i  was  nervous  about  this  one  dude  askin  me  out  &  it  wuz  just  tearin  me  down  cuz  i  wuz  nervous  'bout  it. I  guess  that's  where  i  get  the  "  then  red,  the color  of  passion...".  Well  i'm  gonna  shut  up  now  i  guess  u  get  the  point. pls  comment  on  this  poem!!    

Birth sign: Pisces
Date created: 2001-01-28 15:08:14
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:27
Poem ID: 59869

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