 Daytona Beach / Declaration of Love 

by Who? (an alias) - Virgo

the wind licks
the sticky salt 
in her hair
whipping it
against her coat collar
when she tips
her head

carefully
she mounts the steps
that lead to the stage
in the empty ampitheatre
doing her best to gauge
their relative distance
minus the assistance
of the cloud-captured 
moon

keep going
he whispers
knowing
that fear is slowly sewing
itself
into the tension
in her gut

what?
(she didn't hear)

you're there

she stares 
ahead
barely able to make sense
of all that's spread
in front of her:
seats
headless
in the darkness
a mess
of backless
wire benches
painted white
but barely gray
in the absence of light

then
he says
go

amazing grace
how sweet
the sound
that saved
a wretch
like me

I once
was lost
but now 
I'm found
was blind
but now
I see

Reason for writing:

    <font size=4>FEEDBACK, PLEASE.<font size=3> Strengths and/or weaknesses. This poem is very important.    

Birth sign: Virgo
Date created: 2001-02-19 16:38:12
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:38
Poem ID: 60492

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