a response to this idiot

by antwan fields - Aries

please don't insult my intelligence
by saying anything about bad writing
the last time i checked you out
you werent very exciting
know your role and shut your mouth
leave something to be desired
i didn't realize the slump
in which you were mired
please do not insult my writing
you are absolutely worthless
if youre laughing about your poem 
i found it very mirthless
you know nothing of good poetry
remember the crap you wrote?
i don't win awards for my poetry but yours isn't worth
a dead man's scrote
so please shut up and leave space for the real poets
who occupy this site
go away quietly 
get on some other night
if you really want to criticize
this here aint the place
cause my e-mail is ready
ill hurl you into space
when you win an award
then you can speak
as of now, i think you suck
and i am not unique
shut up! be quiet!
 all those things i could say
but ill put it kindly:
go far away.
leave this site before you get into a war
oops! too late now youre running
you stupid whore. 

Reason for writing:

    arg. dumb girl. don't you realize that im getting tired of you??    

Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2001-03-01 14:57:40
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:43:42
Poem ID: 60680

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