You critize her because she spoke her mind alright she wasnt very kind she brought a very negative rise out of all of you I see where you are coming from but she did say she was kinda overweight maybe she is heartless but she wasnt afraid to speak the way she felt and isnt that what poetry is all about or maybe she had been hurt before you all are quick to deffend the fat but who do you laugh at and critize when you see in public or a clothing store im sure all you have snickered before maybe you feel you have to deffend the "Fat" people or maybe its your guilt that bothers you the most her opnion she only spoke im not saying cruel offensive words should be allowed you say she is a cruel bitch but the tables are turn and the shoes have been switched you critize her for being mean but your doing the same thing its kinda ironic dont you think I feel sad for you both she was wrong for using such cruel words she could have chosen better you were wrong because you proved her point and you let her He was the one who wrote the poem I dont think it was a dedication but a disgrace he was much crueler than she but you didnt want to see your a fan of him and that is good I will admit so am I who wouldnt be he expressed his opnion about overweight people and so did she she just let that sort of thing be
Reason for writing:
i wrote this as to response to the skinny over fat poem and to fucking a fat girls dedication....
Birth sign: Aquarius
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