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by Antwan Fields - Aries

it was turning out to be a bad day, i could already tell
i couldn't even try, i couldn't really sell
i was very very sleepy, i was coming apart with no glue
i couldn't hold together i thought that i was through
as i fell apart i blew up and nearly got into a fight
and it was just 1:00am, the middle of the night
i could see it happening to me, already it had begun
it was me, just me, and i was only one
i could have asked myself if i had a choice or not, what had i said, that made you hate me so much as to wish me dead??
and then he turned
and he smiled at me
and the world suddenly became lighter
at least i could see
the darkness lifted
it was only three
and in the prison of my mind
never had i felt so free.
Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2001-05-11 13:06:11
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:44:20
Poem ID: 62764

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