Number one Critic

by Tiffany Whiddon - Pisces

My Number One Critic

My number one critic is very strange
She likes nothing I do 
She is very rude to me to 
She is mean and cruel
She acts as if I am incapable of anything
She doesn’t help me to believe in myself
 She is so much like me it is unreal we talk the same 
We walk the same as if we have fame
She is not famous why can she talk that way about the work I do
I am not famous why do I talk that way bout the work of other’s 
I say somthings to myself about my work that is cruel and mean 
But who is this critic I dread to see
 I dread to meet
 She walks like me she talks like me 
She acts just like me 
She is me…


Birth sign: Pisces
Date created: 2001-09-01 14:15:06
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:44:57
Poem ID: 64760

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