Not giving up#1(PLEASE READ AND COMMENT )

by Nicholas Ingram - Aries

Not giving up#1

When giving up,
And not caring,
Was my last resort,
When I thought it was all washed away,
You saw me in the hallway,
And told me the words you said,
Made me realize, that I was giving up on you,
Which is no longer true,
I have to learn no to freak,
Over mistakes that real people will forgive for, (hopefully you will),
You looked so perfect today,
Which eased a lot of pain,
I wish some way; you could maybe see what I mean,
That maybe you could understand, that only a few short days,
First impressions mean a lot,
I messed up once,
I WILL DO WHATEVER it takes,
To not make the same mistakes,
I hope you will understand how I feel, and forgive me.


Reason for writing:

    AMBER!    

Birth sign: Aries
Date created: 2001-12-10 15:14:52
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:45:24
Poem ID: 66130

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