look in your grasp, you see the sand, your life you hold, within your hand, no finer point, this great demand, that you alone, forever be, responsible for, your misery.
Reason for writing:
please anyone, give me feedback on my stuff, i'd like to know
if you think it's crap or not.
Birth sign: Aries
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