Atlanta Hotel Room

by Mad Hatter - Capricorn



The longest legs I’ve ever seen
you showed me as
I tried to comfort you
my calm threatening 
to disintegrate into a thousand pieces.
Step back boy, breathe easy.
How could I let myself 
get in the middle of this mess
fall for you so hard, 
too hard, too far in to
hold on too tightly
or to let loose
scared to death you’ll get away.

I listen to you breathe in the dark
Snoring lightly.
I study your profile in
the dim light from the nightlight
by the sink in this hotel room.
I asked to stay and you said yes
I wanted to keep an eye on you
and I	did, all night long
unable to sleep, in awe of
lying next to you
wanting to hold onto you
for keeps.

Here I lay, in love with
another man’s wife.
He belittles and insults you
in public, plunges you into financial ruin, 
and now he beats you, too.
Run, run as far away, while you can.
I’d like to pummel the lout
for all the good it wouid do
I pleaded with you, begged, chided you
to be done with him
to go home to your folks
for a while . . . .
and when you’re ready to return
I’ll be there to pick up after you.

You call your dad.
His sympathetic tone and concern
reassure and convince you.
We head back, you unsteady 
on your feet after sorrow and fear 
and a few glasses of Chardonnay
have weaved their spell, my arm around you
as we lurch down Baker Street.
I make the call to reserve the flight
for the next morning,
almost dropping the phone
as you emerge from the bathroom
wearing pajamas that show off those legs
(Oh, God, help me),
then staying to light your cigarettes
(momentarily brushing your left breast
with the back of my hand)
and to listen as you try to
figure out why all this is
happening to you again.

I don’t want to leave
I want to hear you talk forever,
ponder that beautiful face with
its slightly upturned nose,
tangled blonde hair,
replay again and again 
your scratchy, smoky voice
with its midwestern cadences
and strange ability to comfort me.
My sweet, my beautiful anxiety-laden wonder
I want you for my own
for however long I’m destined to 
hang around this crazy, wildly
spinning place I call home.

Reason for writing:

    What it sounds like . . . .  Now, how to tell her this,
there's the rub. Any suggestions out there?    

Birth sign: Capricorn
Date created: 2002-05-12 00:11:11
Last updated: 2021-04-14 17:18:16
Poem ID: 69666

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