I GIVE UP

by A.N.M. - Pisces

Why is it that we never really know?
What to do, not to do...somehow we BLOW
Something precious, something great
End up feeling doomed to fate
It's as if there is no way
To PLEASE each and every day
Some new crisis, dilemma...
Wreaks it's way in each day
Opposites attract?
I am taken a-back
For it's really not true
At least for me and my guy
He, the critical eye....
I the one who says, "why?"
It could be so much worse!
He has NO real idea
Just how worse it could be!
He is hell-bent you see
On criticising just about ALL
About me!!!
I don't do "this" right
I do "that" all wrong
I don't do ENOUGH!
Goes this critical gong
And why don't I leave?
I am weak and so tired
Takes everything in me
Just to breathe--And I'm wired!
Sometimes I just wish he
Would "boot" my ass out
It'd be better than having
To endure his ill-tout
What's hilarious is that
Because of ME
He has prospered, has grown
Has a great job you see...
But because of my LACK
Because of my LIMP
Because I'm not perfect
Because I'm a wimp
Because I'm not skinny
Because I'm unemployed
Because I'm not what he
Thought could be enjoyed...
Because of SO many things
He is irked and annoyed
And it bites to the bone
Feeling trapped in this void. 

Reason for writing:

    We've been together for 8 years now....    

Birth sign: Pisces
Date created: 2006-11-20 01:43:14
Last updated: 2021-03-03 14:47:05
Poem ID: 71559

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